The Teacher's Nest

Well done, It’s us <3!

It’s a good idea to write about both of the days.

It seems to me, though, that you had problems coming up with ideas. I think that you should think about exactly what you did each day to celebrate the Greek Revolution and write as much information as you can.

Remember:

1. Write an interesting introduction. Maybe you could change it a bit, to make it more interesting, focusing on our school’s celebration.
2. Write a complete description of what happened on both days. Maybe you could re-write some of your sentences.
3. Have paragraphs.
4. Write a nice conclusion.
5. Use interesting words. Why don’t you take a look at activity 3?

I’m sure you’ll do an excellent work, as always!

Looking forward to your article.

Miss L.

🙂

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