The Teacher's Nest

Very good, girls! You did a nice job!

You have important information in your text, but you need to look at the following:

When you talk about the area beyond Akrata you must write as much information as you can. There are so many important places!

1. You wrote about Egio, but what about other big cities which are close to Akrata?
2. You wrote about the villages, but you don’t give any information about them. Are they nice? Why should I visit them? Tsivlos is very famous, but you don’t give any information, at all!
3. How about Egira? I think there is an important archaeological attraction there. Think about it…
4. You could use some of the new phrases or words we learnt. Look at activity 1 (Explore the Area).

5.  As a reader, I don’t think that I have enough information to visit the area beyond your town…

Now, think about these and make the appropriate changes. Then correct your mistakes looking at the guidelines.

I’m sure you’ll do an excellent job!

Miss L.

Στις 31 Μαρτίου 2011 , ώρα 20:59 στην κατηγορία 1st Primary School of Akrata, eWriters project, 2010-2011, Feedback, Projects, projects 2010-2011 . Μπορείτε να παρακολουθείτε τα σχόλια στο άρθρο χρησιμοποιώντας το RSS 2.0 feed Μπορείς να πας στο τέλος και να αφήσεις σχόλιο. Το Pinging προσωρινά δεν επιτρέπεται.