The Teacher's Nest

Well done, girls! You did a wonderful job!

Your first sentence is really wonderful and it makes me want to read the rest of the text! You have lots of nice suggestions but I think that you can make it even better. Here are my suggestions:

1. Your water activities are mixed up: which are for the sea and which for the lake? Picnics and camping ARE NOT water activities!!!

 Maybe you could categorize them (mountain, sea, lake, village).

1. You could use more of the new phrases . For example, you use ‘beautiful’ two times.  Look at activity 3 (Things to do) and get some more ideas on activities. 

Now, think about these and make the appropriate changes. Then correct your mistakes looking at the guidelines.

I’m sure you’ll do an excellent job!

Miss L.

Στις 31 Μαρτίου 2011 , ώρα 21:01 στην κατηγορία 1st Primary School of Akrata, eWriters project, 2010-2011, Feedback, Projects, projects 2010-2011 . Μπορείτε να παρακολουθείτε τα σχόλια στο άρθρο χρησιμοποιώντας το RSS 2.0 feed Μπορείς να πας στο τέλος και να αφήσεις σχόλιο. Το Pinging προσωρινά δεν επιτρέπεται.