Feedback on the biographies
I must say, the harder the mission, the better you perform!
Excellent first draft, everyone! You all did your best!
It is very difficult finding the information you really need and use it to write a text in another language!
And you did it really well!
Now, here are my comments for every group:
Vougiouklaki group
You have most of the information in your biography, but you need to write about the people she worked with, other activities of hers, awards and year of death, as your friends suggested.
Maybe you could write your first sentence better or put it together with the second sentence.
You can use some more phrases/words from activity 2.
Think about your paragrapghs.
Don’t forget to write a nice conclusion!
Well Done! 🙂
Hatzihristos group
You have almost all the information in your text! 🙂 But you could write about his theatrical career, too.
Remember to use some more phrases/words from activity 2.
Think about your paragraphs.
Don’t forget to write a nice conclusion!
Well Done!
Rena Vlahopoulou group
Excellent use of new words from activity 2! 🙂
I can see you haven’t finished your text yet. You wrote lots of interesting information, but you need to write about her most popular films, her awards (if she was awarded) and year of death, as your friends suggested.
Think about your paragraphs.
Don’t forget to write a nice conclusion!
Well Done!
Karezi group
I can see you haven’t finished your text yet. You wrote lots of interesting information, but you need to write about her most popular films, her awards (if she was awarded), other activities and year of death, as your friends suggested.
You used some of the new words, but you can use some more phrases/words from activity 2.
Think about your paragraphs.
Don’t forget to write a nice conclusion!
Well Done! 🙂
Veggos group
You have lots of interesting information in your biography, but you need to write about the people he worked with, other activities , and/ or awards and , as your friends suggested.
Your information could be in a better order. Discuss other ideas with your group.
In your first sentence you don’t say whose is this biography !
You can use some more phrases/words from activity 2.
Think about your paragraphs.
Don’t forget to write a nice conclusion!
Well Done! 🙂
Use the guidelines to correct your mistakes and don’t forget to use your friends’ comments!
Good luck!
🙂
Proud Miss L
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