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Well done to all of you, my little bookworms!
Here you can read my opinion on your reviews.
Write them again carefully and they’re ready to get published!
Well done, Kokorikoi!
You have all the information in the review and it is interesting to read. I like it that you share your honest opinion with your readers!
A small problem: your readers may not understand what is ‘genre’. Maybe you could use the simpler words (adventure story) in your description.
Correct your mistakes carefully!
Well done, IT’S US……<3 !
You have all the information in the review and it is very interesting to read. I like it that you describe the characters so nicely!
Correct your mistakes carefully!
Well done, Black tulips!
You have all the information in the review and it is very interesting to read. I like it that you have information such as the age level!
Correct your mistakes carefully! Remember to write a nice title, too!
Well done! It’s a good review with a nice title, but you must think about the following:
- Unfortunately, I can’t understand half of the description.
- There aren’t any commas, full stops or any kind of punctuation.
- What’s the reviewer’s name?
- Your opinion could be better (good is a very simple word).
In my opinion, you can make it better, if you work as a group and you correct your mistakes carefully.
Well done, Top Girls!
You have all the information in the review and it is very nice. I especially like your opinion!
You must think about the following:
- Unfortunately, I can’t understand a part of the description. Maybe you could use the names from the beginning of the description.
- We don’t use ‘In the end’ like that. Maybe you could finish with a question.
- There isn’t a title for your posting! Think of a nice one!
Correct your mistakes carefully! Remember to write a nice title, too!
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