Everybody ‘s written his/her first draft of the paragraph and his/her two comments.
STEP 5: Homework
Now you’re going to write the second and final version of your paragraph about the film. Take into account the comments you got, read others’ paragraphs, notice anything you could improve -add or cross out ideas, organise better, chech grammar and vocabulary, avoid repetition- and write it!
Post it as a comment under this post.
If you think that it is already perfect, just post it as it is.
But remember: there is always room for improvement!
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