The Teacher's Nest

Well done, Kokorikoi!

You have an interesting introduction! Although, you haven’t finished yet, it’s nice so far. As a reader I would like to know exactly what happened that day and see some photos, too!

Remember:

1. Write a complete description of what happened.
2. Have paragraphs.
3. Write a nice conclusion.
4. Are you going to write a list with the football match’s results? (semi-finals and final)
5. How about photos?

I think that a very good idea is to look at activity 3, because the article is about football. Maybe you can use some new words and make it better!

I’m sure you’ll do an excellent work, as always!

Looking forward to your article.

Miss L.

🙂

Στις 2 Απριλίου 2011 , ώρα 19:05 στην κατηγορία 1st Primary School of Akrata, eWriters project, 2010-2011, Feedback, projects 2010-2011 . Μπορείτε να παρακολουθείτε τα σχόλια στο άρθρο χρησιμοποιώντας το RSS 2.0 feed Μπορείς να πας στο τέλος και να αφήσεις σχόλιο. Το Pinging προσωρινά δεν επιτρέπεται.