The Teacher's Nest

Well done, girls! You did a wonderful job!

Your first sentence is really wonderful and it makes me want to read the rest of the text!!!

You have important information, but you need to look at the following:

1. The sentence about the location is big and a bit confusing. You talk about the north, then the south-west. Maybe it will be better if you write it again and you put the information in a different order, or if you make two sentences out of it.
2. In my opinion, it’s important to say that it is near the sea and specifically on the coast of the Corinthian gulf.
3. As a reader, I would like to know about the older part of the town and the more modern part (near the sea).
4. You could use some of the new phrases or words we learnt.  Look at activity 1 (Travel and maps).
5.  Finally, about the exclamation points (!): we either use one! or three !!!, but not two !! We don’t usually use ! on titles.

Now, think about these and make the appropriate changes. Now, correct your mistakes looking at the guidelines!

Bravo!!!

Miss L.

Στις 31 Μαρτίου 2011 , ώρα 20:58 στην κατηγορία 1st Primary School of Akrata, eWriters project, 2010-2011, Feedback, Projects, projects 2010-2011 . Μπορείτε να παρακολουθείτε τα σχόλια στο άρθρο χρησιμοποιώντας το RSS 2.0 feed Μπορείς να πας στο τέλος και να αφήσεις σχόλιο. Το Pinging προσωρινά δεν επιτρέπεται.